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Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Mrs Dobson am writing this mail on behalf of my duagther Penelope Dobson a prospective student.
I will want him to study the Politics in your institution,
Am an accountant am working in one of those banks here
in Singapore you' might have a little bit understanding
about we accountant that we are not ready to lose a
penny due to our profession.
Am paying this school fee on one Condition:
I must see the Letter of Admission or acceptance letter from the school to again student visa.
Am capable of paying the school fee per semester. i will pay upon his arrival, i will send the AFFIDAVIT OF FINANCIAL SUPPORT with the remaining documents.
About the Registration/application fee i wanted to send it through money order but the bank manager were am working said the amount it to small for me to send that i should add it up with the school fee.
I will make the International cheque avaiable to your institution. Once i receieve the Letter of dmission , i will write the International cheque and send it direct from my bank,
i will pay upon his arrival.
Am very sorry for the delay about the application fee is due to the Banking Procedures that will should send not less then $1,500 any money order to overseas. That is why i want to pay application fee and school fee at once so it would be easier for me.
Am gald when my son showed me your school prospectus through your webiste am highly immpressed.
I want him to start his course by Spring 2002. I don't want the suitation were by the Application fee will be the delay process in this matter.
Am not saying your school should waive the Application fee of "okay". I promise i will send it with the school fee upon his arrival.
Should he go ahead and submit other documents as soon
as possible?
I will be looking forward to hear from you soonest.
Thanks
Mrs Sheena Dobson .
