Planning Task 1 – an example

 

Here is an example of the kind of plan that would work for these questions.

 

Academic:

 

• Introduction

1. Rewrite question – number, %, hospitalisation,
2. Australia, 15 yrs+

 

• Para 1

1. Aus football 24% (3x higher), soccer 9%
2. Squash, volleyball lowest % 1.9%
3. rest range 2 – 8%

 

• Para 2

1. injuries different pattern – Aus football now only 7.5%,
2. rugby 10% and soccer 7.1% Squash 6.4%
3. volleyball lowest score 2.2% safest sport on table

 

• Conclusion/concluding sentence

1. diagram – injury sites -ankles most followed by shoulders
2. rest same 11% – 13%

 

 

General Training:

 

• Introduction

 

1. 3rd year std, live unit10.block 5/
2. very stressed bad roommate/ned urgent action

 

• Para 1

1. room dirty – breathing problems
2. bad health – affect study – doctor says 2 weeks off college
3. roommate refuses to clean, no cooperation

 

• Para 2

1. lack of sleep – roommate up all night
2. entertains friends who drink and smoke so more health issues for me
3. have spoken several times no result

 

• Conclusion

1. request move to single room apartment
2. expect reply very soon

 

Have a look at the completed writing – done by Band 7 students.