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Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Mrs Dobson am writing this mail on behalf of my duagther¹ Penelope Dobson a prospective student.

I will want him² to study the Politics in your institution,

³Am an accountant ³am working in one of those banks here
in Singapore you’ might have a little bit understanding
about we accountant that we are not ready to lose a
penny due to our profession⁴.
³Am paying this school fee on one ⁵Condition:
I must see the Letter of Admission or acceptance letter from the school to ⁶again student visa.

³Am capable of paying the school fee per semester. ⁵i will pay upon his arrival, i will send the AFFIDAVIT OF FINANCIAL SUPPORT with the remaining documents.

About the Registration/application fee ⁵i wanted to send it through ³money order but the bank manager ⁶were ³am working said the amount ⁴it to small for me to send that ⁵i should add it up with the school fee⁴.

I will make the International cheque ¹avaiable to your institution. Once ⁵i receieve¹ the Letter of ¹dmission , ⁵i will write the⁴ International cheque and send it direct from my bank,
⁵i will pay upon his² arrival.

³Am very sorry for the delay about the application fee ⁴is due to the Banking Procedures that ⁴will should send not less then $1,500 any money order ⁴to overseas. That is why ⁵i want to pay application fee and school fee at once so it would be easier for me.
Am ¹gald when my son showed me your school prospectus through your ¹webiste am highly immpressed.

I want ²him to start his course by Spring 2002. I don’t want the suitation ⁶were by the Application fee will ⁴be the delay process in this matter.

³Am not saying your school should waive the Application fee ⁴of "okay". I promise ⁵i will send it with the school fee upon his arrival.
Should he go ahead and submit other documents as soon
as possible?

I will be looking forward to hear from you ⁶soonest.

Thanks
Mrs Sheena Dobson .