Error analysis (a) exercise

How and why should the following be corrected?

1 For those of you who have children and don’t know it, we have a nursery downstairs.
2 I suggest we wait a few more minutes for Maureen to arrive so we can leave altogether.
3 Swingbridge Choir invites any members of the public who enjoy sinning to join the choir.
4 Before baking some cooks brush the chicken pies with milk to give a shiny finish.
5 Student loans are means-tested. This means what your parents’ level of income effects how much you’re entitled to receive.
6 I know there are few people are not interested in seeing the film.
7 Jimmy has good job.
8 The 2010 AGM will be hell May 10 and 11 in Milton Keynes.

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