Error analysis (b) exercise

Are there any corrections to be made in these sentences? Why, and where?

1 Senior managers are away on a training day all day today and tomorrow. Urgent massages can be given to the office staff.

2 The Council is delighted to announce that the new Giant Kid’s Playground will be opened by the comedian Lenny Henry.

3 Today we remember in prayer the many who are sick of our church and community.

4 Me and Dave are hoping to spend a few years living in Delhi.

5 On the edge of a picturesque village with plenty of shops, hotel owners Jean and Malcolm MacDonanald offer guests a warm welcome.

6 Residents refuse to be placed in special dustbins.

7 Thirty two year olds make quite a noise when they’re enjoying themselves!

8 WeightWatchers will meet at 7 PM in the church hall. Please use large double door at the side entrance.

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