How not to write an email

Take a look at the email below. How many errors can you spot?

 

From: dj2@mssgsvc.com

To:joe@mssgsvc.com

cc: suli, beth, jon,ConfSec, dave d, Mr C, alfi, Ms H, accts

Subject: MEETING

Hiya,

Good 2 c u at mtg last wk – but what was goin on wiv that rm? – air con was all over the place and I only had a light jacket with me – I was frozen by end of play! Dyt we need a new venue? We’ve used it for last 3 yrs and I think they take advantage of that -we didnt even gt biccies wiv tea!- can sum1 look at gettin a new venue pls? I tell you,love, we need a change.

No cc of mins here, pls send direct and copy to me for file if u dont know direct add i can get 2 u or send all 2 me & i can fwd but need quick so can get to SF. Pls amend pnt2 as AGRW not in prjct now, LDQ doing until replc found, but may be them perm ? who knows?

Did u hear about Jem’s disciplinary? It’s next week, i thnk. Shocker!

Are you going Fri pm? G is picking me up -want a lift? Should be gr8.

Thanks, then. Any probs wth what i askd for, let me know. Will advise nxt mtg date asap.

Cheers, honey.

DJ

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