Task 2 Forming a Plan – Lesson 21 – my solution

 

Here is my solution.

 

The brainstorm

 

• – Similar problem – easy access, lots of channels./programmes, computers available, parents do same, parents work long hours, looked after by other people, chatting online to friends,

 

• – Measures – motivate to do outdoor sports and activities e.g. as a family, encourage to do sport in school/after school, limit TV time, computer time, no TV’s in bedrooms, giving information about importance of physical exercise for health, go to park, playground, have children some to play at the house

 

Plan:

Introduction:

Research shows British children – too much TV/computers not enough exercise
Compare with Australia/ suggest measures to make life more healthy for young people

 

Para 1:

Australian children – similar problem –
– reasons easy access/lots of channels
– used to computers & chatting w/friends
– not supervised by parents/ no control

 

Para 2:

Parents as link – need to take some action
– put controls in place

Measures:
– sport at school
– sport with their kids
– example join a club or do an activity such as swimming together
– younger kids – go to park, children come to play at house
– educate kids about exercise and health

 

Conclusion: (summary)

Need to ensure health of children
These measures are simple to implement and effective

Yours may be different that is fine The key is that you should have organised the ideas in a similar way so that you have a good frame work for your essay.

 

How did you do?